Hi Anne!
I really enjoyed your piece and your writing style. What I noticed when reading your work was that you particularly enjoy cataloging, or incorporating lists in your work. Like on the second page, "burning filaments marking a buoy, an island, the lighthouse" and on the fifth page, "She wore only her leather jacket, black tights and navy dress." I've also noticed that when you do incorporate these lists they are normally lists of three.
My question for you is what is the status of your relationship with Bethany now?
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